Terribly Slow paced....
One of the most badly choreographed and slow paced movies I've come across....
The whole thing just went by at a snails pace with none of the events being remotely clever. Given the movies decent to good presentation your grasp of pacing and execution in animating is very poor!
Funny and little hearted, I did finc myself liking it and its casual approach towards graphics
Very good short, the only thing I could really critique is the character design, which may need a little tweaking, just to smooth out a few edges but seeing as this was created last year that problem has most probably been addressed,
But I really wonder what kind of edges need tweeking, please contact me if you like. The character is 4 years old now and is still growing, so any kind of real feedback is very welcome.
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